Designing business cards (III)
In a previous post I wrote about how I threw together a business card design for my group BlogSite {Muslimness}.
Although I asked for feedback from the M team (where are they...?) I went ahead to sample the printed design on hammered card. I'll edit the text as it is 'too much' for your average Joe or Jalaal.
Wow, I'm impressed. At first sight, I thought "A bit crowded" but actually I think its fine and if you've been getting good feedback already, then no reason for any change. I think just its awesome that Muslimness has buisness cards period! All due to its creative owner ma'sha'allah. Great work. *says all the above in loud voice*
ReplyDeleteAs-Salaamu 'alaikum,
ReplyDeleteThe L in "Muslimness" should be a darker colour, to fit in with the rest of the word. You actually have to look twice to see what it says as it stands.
@Yusuf, agreed. Having used the same banner for the group blog I knew from the outset it didn't read clearly.
ReplyDelete*back to the drawing board for retweaking*